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Sunday, March 15, 2009

不寻常的… 23/1/2009

不寻常的爱
“哈哈哈哈哈……”一阵奸笑声把我从睡眠中惊醒了。愣了几秒,才发现到原来是从自己的口中传出来的。也许是梦中的我太兴奋了吧!再看看墙壁上那粉红色的钟,我吓到了。昨天和朋友们约好了九点钟在茶餐室见面,而现在已经是八点五十分了!

经过一番匆忙的梳洗后,我急忙打开衣橱。这时,才想起我最爱的牛仔裤还晾在屋外。于是,身上还穿着睡衣的我就冲到屋外,想把牛仔裤收进来。于是我打开门,跑出去。(会不会觉得这句很多余?!随便…ok…接下去)

“叭叭叭叭叭!”(老师:这是母鸡的叫声吗?我:我家的母鸡就是酱子叫的吗=.=)“汪汪汪!”一阵吵杂的鸡叫声和狗吠声引起了我的注意力。我朝着声音的方向走去,那声音把我带到了屋后。一看,原来是只凶猛的野狗正准备与我家的其中一只黑色的母鸡打架!

那只野狗耳朵竖起,眼睛凶狠,还露出了两排洁白且有如刀般尖锐的牙齿。别说是一只微微的小母鸡,连我都快吓得屁滚尿流了。虽然如此,母鸡也不堪势弱,它全身的羽毛都站起来了,翅膀张开,一对珍珠般大的眼睛里完全反映出了它对那只狗的恨恶。

这时,我突然看见母鸡身后有些动静。仔细一看,才发现到原来有四只小鸡正躲在母鸡的身后!我明白了:那母鸡肯定是为了保护自己的小鸡,才想与这只狗打起架来。顿时,让我联想起小学时常玩的游戏--“老鹰捉小鸡”。

那只狗忽然扑向一只小鸡。不晓得是因为一时之气还是一时之惊,母鸡飞到半空中去了。降回地面后,母鸡立刻再次跑到小鸡们前面,使劲地啄那身型比它大至少六倍的野狗。那狗的眼神似乎能喷出火来了,随着它便想一口把母鸡咬死。然而,母鸡却侥幸避开了。野狗似乎不愤,再次攻击那只母鸡。这次,几滴血喷了出来。

离它们约三米之地的我好像变成了木头人,从刚才一直到现在连一根头发也没动过。但当我见到这只已受伤却还在准备继续搏斗下去的英勇母鸡时,我的内心就好像被些什么触到了。我突然有了一股不知哪来的老虎胆,发现到自己的脚正在向着那只狗追跑,嘴巴正不停地咒骂着那只狗,然而手中却一个武器也没有。令人意想不到的是,那只狗好像也被我吓到了,转身就跑。正所谓“一山还有一山高”啊!我匆忙地跑进屋里,换上衣服,准备出门。

今天所发生的事情真令我难以忘怀。如此的大爱,竟能浮现在一只母鸡身上,这是何等地不寻常啊!





老师的评语:内容新颖,特别,表达能力与遣词用字都不错,继续努力哦!
我的评语:老师…你教了我一年后就应该不会再说我的内容新颖了啦…旧颖就有…我的作文通常都是以动物为主题的…哈哈…

Saturday, March 14, 2009

完成故事(结尾) 17/9/2008(不知道是不是预考的时候?)

“喵!喵!喵!喵!喵!”一阵又凄惨又尖的猫叫声把正在发白日梦的我给吵醒了。我用双手捂着耳朵,想继续发我的白日梦,可是持续不断的猫叫声把我脑海中一幅幅美丽的画面变成许多小猫的画面了!我觉得很无奈,便走出屋外探个究竟。

走出屋外,才发现到猫叫声是从我家门前面的一棵大树上传下来的。树下则有一只很凶恶的野狗,连站在远方的我都能看见它那两排尖锐的牙齿。这只狗正围着大树转圈子,目不转睛地盯着树上的小猫。虽然这只狗没发出声音,可是这样给我的感觉更可怕,更恐怖。再加上它那尖尖竖起的三角形耳朵和直直的尾巴,足以让我立刻跑进屋里,关上门。

虽然在屋里给了我无比的安全感,可是猫的叫声还是不绝于耳,把我给烦得不成人形了。我心中正在犹豫,难道要我为了一只小猫牺牲自己的小命吗?可是“喵喵喵”的叫声真的是很烦,很烦,很烦!于是,我鼓起勇气,拿着我的武器--两把雨伞,再次走到屋外。

我一步一步地向大树走去,我的脚好像变得千斤重似的。我好不容易才走到离那只狗约一米的距离,壮起胆子,跺了一下脚。那只狗转过来瞪着我。我呆呆地望着它,它的那两排尖利的牙齿是多么的耀眼!但我不可能一辈子对着一只狗“放电”,所以终于吐出了两个字:“回…回家。”过后才想起,这是野狗,它没有家!但奇迹的是,它真的转身跑了!正当我高兴地称赞着自己时,听见后面传来了一些声音。我转过身,心里想:这回不好了。

我后面竟然是…另一只狗!这只狗若要拿来和刚才的那只比较,那一只可算是娇小玲珑了!正当我快晕过去时,我看见手上的雨伞。我将手上的雨伞向着那只狗打开。幸好那只狗是胆小如鼠的,我把它吓走了!

虽然两只狗都走了,那只猫还在叫!看来,它应该是抽筋了。没爬过树的我,今天真的感觉到自己很伟大,于是心情比平时好。我做了一件我平时绝对不会做的事情--我冒着生命的危险,爬上大树,把小猫救了下来!我心里真的好欢喜,很有成就感。可是又想起,我今天表现出了这么大的勇敢,却没人来欣赏!

咦?现在才发现到,怎么身边围了这么多人我都没察觉到的?这时掌声响起,大家异口同声地说:“恭喜,恭喜,你终于成功了!”

Flowers 14/2/2009

I glanced at the calendar. It was the fourteenth of February. Two weeks ago, I had excitedly marked a red heart next to the date. But now, it was the day, and I did not feel excited anymore. Six days ago, I had just heard from my friends that my secret crush was crushing on another girl. Since that day, my mind had become strangely blank and I hardly ever noticed what I was doing.

I heard the rattle of the gate. It was the postman. I got up halfway from my chair, but then sat back down. Let somebody else get the post, I thought. I was sure that there would not be any letters for me.

"Beep, beep, beep!" The postman was honking. I got up most unwillingly from and went to the door, kicking a pouffe out of the way as I went to the door.

The postman handed three letters to me. I glanced at them. One was for my father, and the other two were for my sister. My heart sank. What had I expected? I turned on my heel moodily and started to go back into the house when a movement caught my eye. I looked to the left, and saw it, a bunch of flowers lying just outside the front door.

I blinked. Where had the flowers come from? I stooped down and picked them up. They were not just any flowers, they were roses. In fact, they were red roses. Red roses meant love. And it was Valentine's Day. And, judging from the movement I saw just now, the roses had just been thrown there seconds ago.

I dashed to the gate, and was just in time to see a boy disappearing round a corner. Even without seeing his face, I know who he was. It was my secret crush, Jeffery Tan. For a moment, I just stood there, trying to get my brain to absorb this startling fact. Jeffery just threw a bunch of roses at my front door? Had the rumours been untrue after all? Was it possible that he was in love with...with me?

I rushed after him. Just when I had nearly caught up with him, he broke into a sudden run. I raced after him, screaming, "Stop! Stop!". The passersby stared at us and a burly man stuck out his foot. Jeffery tripped over the man's foot and fell, sprawling on all fours, on the ground.

I hurried towards Jeffery and panted, "Are you all right?". He seemed surprised to see me. He nodded and glanced over his shoulder. Without a word, he walked straight on, motioning to me to follow. When we finally reached a busy street, he said to me, "Just now there was somebody following me."

I looked at him. He had run away just because he heard somebody following him? Not because he wanted to avoid me?

"And by the way," he added. "Why are you here?"

"I...I think the somebody who was following you might have been...been...me." I was stammering shamefully, watching as Jeffery's face grew steadily angrier.

"That was you?" He didn't raise his voice, but there was a certain amount of strain behind his voice that meant he was trying hard to restrain his anger.

"Yes--well," I added defensively. "It's your fault in the first place, who threw a bunch of roses over my gate just now?"

"What have your stupid roses got to do with me?" He was really losing his temper now. "Everyone knows that the girl of my dreams is Polly! I wouldn't look at you twice."

I felt humiliated and frustrated. "So...so it really wasn't you?"

"Were you deaf just now?" he yelled at me. "And now," he glanced at his watch, on which the surface was badly scratched due to the fall he had just now. "I'm ten minutes late for my first date with Polly!"

He pushed me roughly out of the way and, within minutes, was out of sight. I stood rooted to the spot, unable to move. Even my brain seemed to have jammed.

A loud honk brought me back to my senses -- I was standing too far out in the road. I walked back home, trying to comfort myself with the thought that even though my wildest dreams had been shattered, there was still a boy in this world who loved me enough to send me, anonymously, a bunch of flowers.

It seemed like no time at all when I reached home and was unlatching my front gate. I was walking to the front door of my house when my sister suddenly appeared out of the back garden. She was holding a bunch of hibiscuses.

"What are these for?" I asked, staring at the flowers.

"Oh, I thought that, since the flowers are in full bloom, I might as well pick some to decorate our house," said my sister. "Then our house wouldn't look so plain." She paused and added, "I just need one more type of flower, I've already got hibiscuses and the roses," she indicated the roses lying outside the front door, and continued, "that I picked just now."

完成故事 29/1/2008

升上中三后,我以做功课为理由,说服爸爸安装宽频网络。从此。我沉醉在网络的虚拟世界中,而真实世界里的一切事情,对我来说已不再是重要的了。

每天放学回到家,我就会立刻在电脑的键盘上滴滴答答地打下一个最熟悉的网址,翻译出来是“爱喜秋”(看不懂的人,这是ICQ)。这网站是让大家在网上认识朋友的,具有一系列的聊天室。每次,我都会去“朋友与家人”的聊天室。我在那儿认识了一位男生,他对我非常好。平时文静的我,把心事全都告诉了他--志文。因为,我心里总是想着反正志文不认识我,所以他是不会泄露我的秘密的。不知不觉的,我发现到我对志文的感情不止是朋友一般。而志文也似乎对我有一丝的爱情,于是我们便在网上谈起恋爱来了。(cheap到可怜=.=)

于是,在我每一天的日常活动中,总不可缺少上网,而且一上网,就是几个小时了。由于我今年将面临初中评估考试,所以我为自己定下了一个时间表,每天都得准时温习功课。但,这都已是过去的事情了。那时间表,早已被搁在一旁。我的读书时间全都花在上网。不但如此,而且每当学校有课外活动时,我一定不去,因为我要留在家上网。当然,这情况导致我的学业一败涂地,成绩差强人意,成绩册里“满江红”,而我的课外活动的分数是零分。但,这一切的一切,对我来说已不再是重要了。

我性格里的转变引起了各方面人士的注意。老师们对我的劝勉及责备,我当作耳边风。至于同学门的藐视,对我来说,一点影响力都没有,因为我至少还有志文!^^至于我的家人,经过多次的劝告后,他们终于气馁了,任凭我继续过我这虚空的生活。“一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴”这句谚语,让我听了好多次,不过我却还不懂得去理解,反之还感到厌烦。

我把这些事情都倾诉给志文,他就给予我鼓励,叫我千万不可这么轻易放弃这段感情。后来,他也提议要和我见面。由于当时的我心情错乱,我便答应了。我们约好在下个星期六,在柔佛洲的其中一个小村庄里见面。原来那就是志文的家乡!可是,第二天早上,我在报章上读到一个改变了我生命的新闻。

有一位女生,年龄约十六,十七岁,她也和我一样,在“爱喜秋”网站的聊天室遇见一位男生,与他建立起感情来。有一天,该名男生把女生约了出去,打算与她见面。怎么知道,一见面时,那名男生就攻击那名女生,想要侵犯她。幸好,临时有两名警察赶了上来,将男生捉回警察局。很巧的一件事情就是,他们相约的地点也是在柔佛洲的同一个村庄。更加不可思议的就是,那名男生在聊天室里的用户名竟然是是--志文!

读完这一段新闻后,我顿时晴天霹雳。在那一杀那之间,我看透了志文一直以来的虚假,而他一直以来给我的建议和安慰,都是背后带着刺,是故意要增强我对每一件事的负面态度。而在这时刻,我也从我从前的一切错误中醒悟了过来。这网络世界在我生命中,就像泡泡一样,“碰”的一声,破碎了。

经过这一次的教训后,我才明白到自己是多么的物质,容易被人影响。所谓“不经一事,不长一智”,我会好好地从这次的错误中领取教训,改过自新,从新做人。

Friday, March 13, 2009

完成故事 16/7/07

有一天,我正要从百货公司走出来时,一名保安人员把我拦住了。我为之一怔,吓得往后跑了几步。

那为保安人员以为我要逃之夭夭,就大声地喝着我:“小偷,别跑!”他的叫声引来许多人的注意。后来,我才发现到门边的警钟正在响着。在我的匆忙之中,我竟然没有发现到,

顿时,我的情绪十分混乱,害怕中参杂了紧张,紧张中却充满了愤怒,我最渴望的手提电脑已经售完了,现在还要面对这种情况。在我一时的愤怒之下,我不顾一切地把保安人员狗血淋头地臭骂一顿。四周围的人都愣住了。我也知道他们心中在想:这个人,偷了东西,不但不认错,还在那边骂人!想到这里,我更生气了。有其中一位售货员似乎要开口讲话,不过我根本就不让机会给他插嘴。

后来,当我冷静下来了,该保安人员告诉我,他有权利怀疑我偷了百货公司的货品,要求搜查我的背包。正当我无奈地把背包交过去时,刚才的那名售货员则向我们跑来。

我心里正开始胡思乱想了:唉,这个人应该是找到了什么证据,他们要控告我了。我将要坐牢了?不知道爸爸妈妈会有什么反应呢?想着想着。该名售货员开口说话了。我们大家都大吃一惊。

原来,刚才那个售货员不小心把一个水壶弄跌在地上了。那个水壶滚出了店门口,因此引起了警钟的响声。而当时,我又刚好就经过,所以就引起了这场误会。

那位保安人员连忙向我道歉,而我也因刚才一时的脾气向他道歉。于是,我们便互相原谅了对方,和好了。

我们无论做什么事情,都一定要先查清楚,不然回引起许多的误会,此外,我们也不应该随便向人发脾气,因为这会伤到别人的感情。

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完成故事 1/9/06

隔壁家的陈嫂和对面的杨太又吵架了,由于被她们吵得不能温习,便出去探个究竟。陈嫂和杨太虽然是对好朋友,但是她俩的脾气都十分暴躁,时常吵架,害得这个无辜的邻居--我,常因不能专心温习功课而导致成绩名落孙山。

当我出去,听了一段对话后,才知道吵架的起因是陈嫂向杨太借了一个锅,现在却不见了。据陈嫂口中所说的,她把锅带给杨太时,见没有人在家,于是便把锅放在杨太的门口前,哪里知道却不见了。

她们正在大声地骂对方。陈嫂的脸红得冒烟。她的双眉竖了起来,正举起一个拳头。至于,杨太,她的脸可以烤鸡蛋了。她拾起了一块大石头,正在想办法瞄准陈嫂的头。根本没有人会相信她们是平时的那两位斯斯文文的美女。

我不想只是袖手旁观,于是走前几步,想调解一下纠纷,怎么知道就在这时杨太把石头丢过来了。杨太是出名瞄准东西的能力差,那石头“飞”进我家的大门口,打破了一个花盆。

这时,原本在睡觉的妈妈被花盆打碎的声音吵醒了。当她出去时,她就尽量使双方安静下来,问清楚事情的经过。这时,一个声音从杨家屋里传了出来。

“宝贝,你看我准备了什--”杨先生大摇大摆地走了出来。由于他年纪大了,所以耳朵有点聋,刚刚才发现到他妻子正在吵架。“发生什么事啊?”

当我们把事情一五一十告诉他后,他的脸涨红了。原来,今天是他和杨太结婚的第十周年,他特地准备了午餐,所以就用了那个锅。

杨太不好意思地向陈嫂道歉,陈嫂也原谅了她。我则回到房内继续温习功课。

邻居之间有时难免会有些磨擦,但最重要的两件事是要知错和互相谅解,这样才能够快乐地生活在一起。